Some new scenes after the feedback.

She can here someone singing to himself coming from the other side of the house

Girl looks at the flute that has just hit her boot.


Flute Rolls from the dark to her feet. I think this will give it a more magical appearance rather than just sitting there. I am seriously considering 3D at this stage for this scene.

Girl Inspects the House as she walked in in the previous frame.
I like it a lot! Definitely much clearer now.
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