-The music could come in more softly at the beginning with more bias towards the wind and the bird noises. - 0.21 again put more focus on the car noises above the music - 0.27 you could fade out the music here and explore the ambience of the room. The footsteps on the wooden floor, creaking floorboards. Its a new place and is mysterious/interesting and the music mood hasn't changed to support that change. - 0.41 maybe don't reintroduce the music as the silent ambient you have at 0.59 is really quite nice. -1.41 Here as it is a sudden realisation about the flute, maybe the background music should not follow through, just the spiritual flute music. -1.47 The mood here is of hope and excitement and I feel that the music doesn't match. Either cut it and just use the digetic flute with a good ambient background overlay or get other music that reflects this change in mood. 1.47 - 2.14 the visual mood goes from hopeful and slowly slides down to sad. The music doesn't change. 2.19 I really like this point!! 2.38 - this is the only point where this music seems to work. So in summary I think you need to find a new piece of music for the 1.47-2.14 section of the piece as it doesn't work at the moment.
Excellent progress! - I hope my comments aren't too much for you...
-The music could come in more softly at the beginning with more bias towards the wind and the bird noises.
ReplyDelete- 0.21 again put more focus on the car noises above the music
- 0.27 you could fade out the music here and explore the ambience of the room. The footsteps on the wooden floor, creaking floorboards. Its a new place and is mysterious/interesting and the music mood hasn't changed to support that change.
- 0.41 maybe don't reintroduce the music as the silent ambient you have at 0.59 is really quite nice.
-1.41 Here as it is a sudden realisation about the flute, maybe the background music should not follow through, just the spiritual flute music.
-1.47 The mood here is of hope and excitement and I feel that the music doesn't match. Either cut it and just use the digetic flute with a good ambient background overlay or get other music that reflects this change in mood.
1.47 - 2.14 the visual mood goes from hopeful and slowly slides down to sad. The music doesn't change.
2.19 I really like this point!!
2.38 - this is the only point where this music seems to work.
So in summary I think you need to find a new piece of music for the 1.47-2.14 section of the piece as it doesn't work at the moment.
Excellent progress! - I hope my comments aren't too much for you...
Jack