Monday, February 28, 2011

Script (Updated 01/03/11)

scene 1

ext. garden - day

JOHN stands next to a beautiful young orchid-like flower in his garden that stands tall right under a big tree, beside him is his daughter ALICE.

She holds on to a small teddy bear and looks puzzled

John is holding a garden watering can in one hand and the other behind his back, he shakes his head in disapproval throws it away the watering can and from behind his back bring in a small box and shows it to his daughter, like a telemarketing ad.

The box says "SPRINKLER 3000" and has an image of a happy man with his new gadget, a small futuristic looking sprinkler, holds it for a second before ripping away the front, revealing the contents.

John pulls out his new sprinkler and it's remote control, and drops the box. Puts the sprinkler in place right next to his special flowers.

Alice is intrigued

He clicks a hose onto the end of the sprinkler.

Then clicks the hose onto a tap.

John picks up his daughter and walks get off the grass onto a gravel path.

He leaves her on the ground and they both look towards the orchid-like flower with the proud sprinkler standing next to it.

John, very theatrical, turns the dial on the remote to a low watering setting and presses the button.

The sprinkler begins to water the Orchid-like flower in a stylish way.

John looks back at his daughter and gives her a 'what do you think? ah?' laugh.

Being even more of a show off he turns the dial even more to a medium water level.

Alice looks and contemplates in awe, turns to her father then back to the garden where she notices that something has happened.

John turns towards the garden, a squirt of water goes flying passed him, he just manages to dodge it.

(Foley: Cat screaming and cans mashing) John covers his face protecting himself from what just happened, a rake goes flying passed his head which he manages to dodge. He gives a 'that was close' gesture.

He fixes his glasses cleans his shirt and gives a slight grin to his daughter.

As john is just about to speak when a strong squirt of water hits him on the face which makes him fall to the ground, he quickly stands back up looking back at the faulty sprinkler in anger.

He looks at the remote control, electric sparks come out of it, it's wet.

He walks right up to the sprinkler and stares in an intimidating way right into it which turns off.

John turns the dial once more but now to a High water level and just when he is going to press the button another squirt attacks him.

He cleans his face and glasses and stares back at the sprinkler, which squirts a tiny bit of water.

John stands back up and turns to walk towards his daughter but does not notice a rake that was lying on the grass which hits him straight on the face.

he picks it up.

John is angry now and marches up to his daughter with the rake in one hand and presses the button, but nothing happens, he shakes the wet remote control and presses it again, but still nothing happens.

Now at his boiling point he walks quickly back at the sprinkler with the rake, he intends to hit the sprinkler with it when a strong squirt of water explodes that throws him into the tree just above (Foley: Sound of screeching Cat). the rake flies away.

Alice jumps in surprise.

John is trapped in the tree, with the cat clinged on his face in fear, he tears the cat off his face. He looks back down at the sprinkler, pulls out the button and presses it as hard as he can.

scene 2

EXT. neighborhood Street - Day

A huge water explosion is seen in the distance, like an atomic bomb.

ext. garden - day

(FOLEY: Cartoon fall) John falls in front of his daughter all dirty and wet, with one of the flowers sticking out of his head. Alice is as dirty and wet as he is. She looks like a cranky drowned rat.

Alice pulls out her soaking teddy bear and flaps it in front of his father and walks away.

She then brings back the watering can and waters the orchid-like flower on her dad's head, kicks the can away and walks back to the house very angry.

John sighs. the flower falls off his head.

end of scene

Sunday, February 27, 2011

Director's Notes

CHARACTERS

The characters will be fully animated, trying not to look stiff in each frame. The line will be a closed inked one and the inside colored with flat desaturated colors,

John will be of a brighter color than Alice at the start of the animation and Alice will be more humble. In the final scene of the animation she stands over her father as his colors have slightly faded out because of the dirt and water.

character description

John is an over excited and over enthusiastic man, but as he realizes that his sprinkler is not impressing his daughter he begins to humble down. By the end he gives in and accepts his defeat.

Alice is a shy, curious girl and we see that her relationship with her father is very close. She stands around in the animation trying to figure out if there is any point for her on what John is trying to show her, but finally gets mad at him for getting her and her teddy wet.

BACKGROUNDS

Japanese watercolor art and the classical watercolor backgrounds of Disney and Warner Bros. have been used as inspiration. Trees will be slightly washed out and no strong colors will be used so that it does not interfere with the characters.

COMEDY

The movements in the animation will set the mood of the film, the comedy will be strictly movement based. Quick and sharp. Reference for this is Pixar's "Presto" and "One man Band", as well as the classic Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck Gags.

Each pose is exaggerated and theatrical.

MUSIC

Idea #1: The music will follow movements as the character walks through the animation. blinks, steps, blasts, etc.

Idea #2: A Jazz song in the background that will follow the movements, and gradually increase as the actions begin rise to the climax.

Thursday, February 24, 2011

Thumb with nails

I am quite happy with the script, and have narrowed it down a couple of times and changed it another few.
Next step thumbnails, it's probably one of the things I should've done more on The Blackberry Monster. Will upload to the thumbnails section shortly.

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Bit n' Pieces


It's been kinda of a long summer holiday, with no steady weather and not much things to do rather than just keep up with art. Managed to help in a few projects along the way as a concept artist and as a storyboard artist and finally got my own webpage (www.scorpied.com)... sent The Blackberry Monster down to MIAF and St Kilda Film Fest, and will know if I am in during March.
I probably spoke to most of the animation studios around Melbourne to see if I MIGHT score a job with any of them, put was put down after realizing there is not much field here in Melbs at all, so not very happy on that side. But the road doesn't end there, the new and final year of animation's got me excited and with newly recharged batteries.
Last year I noticed a lack of humor in Holmesglen screening so this year I'm going back to the good ol' gag style cartoon which by the way are the ones I enjoy most, hopefully with the idea I have for this year I can fly close to doing something like PIXAR and WB shorts, I am pretty confident that I can.
So far I wrote part of the script, but most of it are actions and just gotta get down and do the storyboard and figure out the timming for it to be funny. I already have someone on board for the music and an extra had for post production.
Well here are early concepts for one of the characters, which I based on my Dad and grandad...I am quite happy with the coloured one. But I will continue designing.